A #HookReview of The Mansion’s Twins, by Rose M. Channing

The imagery was hard to visualize and the action was bogged down by passive voice.

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The Readers Favorite, 5 star medallion caught my attention. I wondered if it was real. I read the blurb and was pretty convinced I would not like the writing. It had grammar problems, with commas in particular. (A weakness of mine at times – too many commas.) I popped open the book to more of the same. The imagery was hard to visualize and the action was bogged down by passive voice.

Author: CJPerry

Stay at home parent of 2 girls, 4 and 16. Struggling writer. Thats me.

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